ProsciuttoMan's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[QuaRUNtine Adventure]

Clearly not made for web, with controls that don't even work on computers and a double jump that doesn't work whatsoever.

SubinAnimation responds:

Ya, actually it was made for android devices, me and m friend are working to improve the controls. Thanks for review

[Fight and Flight]

Kinda weird that the dodge and attack use the same animation, but nice aesthetic, and entertaining gameplay. Reminds me of something you'd see on iOS back in the day.

[Clumslime and the Flagpole]

This is surprising really great! I'd absolutely love to see what sort of game this would end up being with original assets.

Kutejnikov responds:

Thanks! I plan to add 6 or more levels.

[Telekinesis Gun]

Seems neat, but it's way too zoomed out to be able to understand anything that's going on.

buboi0411 responds:

sorry i dont know how to make it fullscreen

[Paint Splash!]

Can't understand any of the goals, music is grating, and the protagonist's movements are too slow coupled with an underutilized jump with a very annoying sound effect.

[After the Portal]

Camera is way too zoomed in making leaps of faith way to common, and the decision to keep the player in control for a while after being killed is just baffling to me.
The protagonist is also way too slow for my liking, but there's a solid foundation here.

sandwich2 responds:

Thank you for the feedback, I will keep that in my mind.

[Donut Island]

It has the potential to be something great, but the movement feels a bit too fast for me, and the lack of animation in some places just feels super jarring.

[Hour of the Wolf]

Neat aesthetic choices, but the strange jumping mechanics and extremely easy difficulty early on fail to keep me engaged with it for very long.
I think it could have easily benefitted from a more traditional double jump, as has been pointed out by many before me.

[My first game]

For a first game, it's far from bad, but things feel pretty unsatisfying to pull off here, generally speaking. Controls are a bit stiff and confusing too.

marui32 responds:

I struggled a lot with the controls, i just wanted to get them working because i spent so much time on controls instead of enemies or some fetuars. Thanks for your feedback though it means a lot.

[LiLy's Revenge: Broken]

Can't figure out how to progress from the first screen whatsoever.
If I have to ask you how I'm meant to leave the first screen of the first level, I think it'd probably be necessary to re-evaluate your decisions in terms of game design. I think players would appreciate some better direction in terms of what they're supposed to do here, even if it's something as simple as "press X to do Y".
Aesthetic charm can only carry a game so far, and while the visuals certainly deliver in that capacity, almost everything else could definitely use a lot of work.
There's clearly an effort at making something of substance here, but you should really consider having some people test the game out before you publish it.